More Paintings Day 4

18 Jan

Red CabooseUsing the Summer Stories Short Story Competition put together by the Maine Writers & Publishers Alliance and Shanti Arts Publishing as a source for prompts this week. Maine writers are invited to write and submit (by March 1) short stories inspired by a series of paintings by Maine artist Leslie Anderson. The day’s shorty was inspired by Anderson’s “Narrow Gauge.”


Working Title: The Conductor
1st Sentence: The red caboose was not, as everyone around him thought, Jeffrey’s favorite toy.
Favorite Sentence: When the babysitter thinks he’s nuzzling, even kissing the red caboose—ohmygod so adorable—he is, in fact, whispering instructions.
Word Length: 900


Photo by Ktb615 5/2010.

More Paintings Day 3

17 Jan

Vanilla ConeUPDATE. “Vanilla” was one of the winning entries, along with “Reflections,” drafted here on 10/17, and “Imaginary i1/19. Many thanks to Leslie Anderson for her beautiful paintings, to MWPA and Shanti Arts for sponsoring the contest, to judge Ron Currie, Jr. for selecting my shorties, and again to Shanti Arts for publishing such a beautiful book.

Back to the well of the Summer Stories Short Story Competition put together by the Maine Writers & Publishers Alliance and Shanti Arts Publishing. Maine writers are invited to write and submit short stories in response to paintings by Maine artist Leslie Anderson. Mainers, the deadline is March 1! Today’s shorty was inspired by Anderson’s “Morton’s Moo.”


Working Title: Vanilla
1st Sentence: Jerry was counting pairs of shorty-shorts—a deeply sad fashion trend he’d hoped would never come back—when he heard the “Here you go” from the bangs-and-ponytail that had taken his order, and turned to claim the Styrofoam cup she had pushed through the window.
Favorite Sentence: “It’s always the nilla-magnariffics who don’t know what they really want,” whispered someone in the crowd, followed by uh-huhs and yeps.
Word Length: 739


Photo by Flickr user Steven Depolo 8/2009.

More Paintings Day 2

16 Jan

KayakAnother day inspired by the Summer Stories Short Story Competition put together by the Maine Writers & Publishers Alliance and Shanti Arts Publishing. Maine writers are invited to write and submit short stories in response to a series of delightful paintings by Maine artist Leslie Anderson. The deadline is March 1 and submissions need to be snail-mailed: Details here. I wrote today’s shorty after meditating on Anderson’s “Lake Rower.” And yes, I do know that this painting does not feature a kayak but I like the sound of the words “holy kayak” much more than “holy rowboat.”


Working Title: Holy Kayak
1st Sentence: He had been taught to call the bird an egret and she had been taught to call it a heron and somehow neither had stumbled over the common knowledge that the two words were often interchangeable, particularly if you are not an expert in ornithology, which neither was, and so they missed the simple truth that they were, in fact, BOTH right.
Favorite Sentence: After a few decades of extreme muscle-condescension, if you, Mr. Bigger and Stronger, decide to get in her way, on a day when she happens to be holding a paddle in her hands—a paddle that she is quite handy with, a paddle that has sculpted her small shoulders and arms—will she use that paddle as a weapon?
Word Length: 1,036


Photo by Walter Siegmund 4/2009.

Another Week of Paintings!

15 Jan

ClamsMaine writers, look sharp! The deadline is drawing near for the Summer Stories Short Story Competition put together by the Maine Writers & Publishers Alliance and Shanti Arts Publishing. Mainers are invited to write and submit short stories in response to a series of delightful paintings by Maine artist Leslie Anderson. The deadline is March 1 and these submissions must be postedDetails here. I used 7 of these paintings as story prompts for a Daily Shorty week in October and I’m going to use 7 more as prompts this week. I’m in love with these folks for giving me extra incentive for two weeks of shorties and providing me with gold-plated prompts! I chose “Clammer” for today’s inspiration, which reminded me of a scrap I’d written for another (unfinishd) story. I rescued the scrap and built on it for the day’s story. Incidentally, I am a huge fan of the Maine lobster, but all seafood here is heaven and I’ve met quite a few natives who consider clams to be Maine’s best treasure.


Working Title: Dad Day
1st Sentence: Oh great, it’s a Dad day.
Favorite Sentence: Yeah, it did make you feel a little bit like hot fudge slipping off a scoop of ice cream.
Word Length: 1,200


Photo by Flickr user Leon Brocard 1/2008.

Easier

14 Jan

Banana RoyaleFinally, a break! This one didn’t land in my lap whole but I got it in two reasonable sessions and even had time to polish it up a bit before evening fell. Very rare, these days. And goodbye to another week of this challenge! Celebrating with this picture of a “banana royale.” If it were real I could down it in about 2 minutes flat, I think.


Working Title: Faker
1st Sentence: As a rule Brenda felt a slight flutter of discomfort immediately before giving a reading, but only just.
Favorite Sentence: How unattractive, to be so repulsed by a child.
Word Length: 1,215


Photo by Flickr user Janine from Mililani, Hawaii, 6/2008.

Another Hard Push

13 Jan

TulipsAgain, many false starts. Much gnashing of teeth. Finally, a decent little shorty. Awarding myself these tulips for all the recent especially hard work. Very tired.


Working Title: In That Moment
1st Sentence: She has no idea what possessed her in that moment.
Favorite Sentence: In that stopped moment she had looked at her husband’s torso topped by a bowtie topped by a plate and she had laughed, a short series of barks powered by her diaphragm that would have embarrassed her any other time, anywhere else.
Word Length: 459


Photo by Jebulon 1/2011.

Mishmash

12 Jan

ProustVery nearly beaten by this one. Many false starts, much exhaustion, no direction, pure frustration. So I played free-association with a scene I didn’t know how to end… and then forced an ending. Done.


Working Title: Staying Power
1st Sentence: What could she do but stare.
Favorite Sentence: She had read ALL of Proust and all of Balzac, and didn’t know another soul who could dit la même.
Word Length: 579


Photo of Czech edition of Marcel Proust’s A la Recherche du Temps Perdu by Hadonos 1/2010.

Capturing a Mood

11 Jan

Red RoseI woke up thinking morbid thoughts. So… morbid shorty.


Working Title: Morbid Much?
1st Sentence: She keeps a Word file that lists all distinguishing marks in case her body ever has to be identified.
Favorite Sentence: The current version of her obituary includes the best poem she ever wrote—about the exquisitely soft furl of a rose petal, shrinking and black-edged—but she’s thinking of taking it out in favor of a song that came to her last Wednesday while she soaked in the tub.
Word Length: 374


Photo by Marcus Obal 4/2007.

Another Random Phrase

10 Jan

DoughSometimes I just have to start with nothing. My mind roams and I type words or sentences and then delete them and type more and delete again and more and again until an image holds, for no reason I can divine, and I stop deleting as the sentences spin out into a larger whole.


Working Title: His Hands
1st Sentence: In his hands the dough was a living thing, elastic, full of breath, the surface glistening silky soft in the overhead light.
Favorite Sentence: They were not musical, they did not shape themselves to a paintbrush or a shoulder, they were clumsy with a pen and couldn’t keep hold of a needle.
Word Length: 354


Photo by Jon Sullivan 4/2004, courtesy of pdphoto.org.

My Permanent Record

9 Jan

Gold StarI don’t think people threaten kids with what might appear on their Permanent Record anymore. But it was something I heard a lot growing up. Don’t even think of doing X or it’ll wind up on your Permanent Record! Strangely, this threat had teeth, at least for me. But I’ve always been a coward. Today’s shorty is another written in the form of a list of 7 things.


Working Title: On My Permanent Record
1st Sentence: 1. I was winning the gold star race.
Favorite Sentence: Pretty young thing, said my quickened breath, the faint moans of the fake nightmare, pretty frail thing with her long, tangled hair, her skin so pale it shows the blue-veined pulse in her wrist, in the hollow of her neck, can you see that, in the moonlight, can you see how fragile?
Word Length: 834


Photo by Flickr user Nina Matthews from Australia 11/2010.

Hello Week 37!

8 Jan

Fudge TurtleI neglected to celebrate the completion of Week 36 in January 7th’s story post below. Likewise, I began this week forgetting that I should use a writing prompt to keep up with my practice (for some time now) of alternating weeks using writing prompts with weeks of coming up with ideas entirely randomly. Well, that’s how it’s been, lately. I may have to accept that I’m not going to regain a normal-ish level of energy for the remainder of this challenge. Major mental fatigue has settled in and seems to abate somewhat for only a couple of days at a time. I do continue to write stories that surprise and delight me, at least one every week. How long can I go? I guess we’ll find out. For now enjoy with me this turtle fudge to celebrate another week of shorties. The day’s story was inspired by a conversation I had recently with a friend about fertility treatments.


Working Title: Egg-less
1st Sentence: Egg Mommy.
Favorite Sentence: Purgatory is trudging around with your flat abdomen, your biological clock clanging like Big Ben, dodging growing bellies in pastel colors, sandwich-bag dresses with big bows centered on the womb, and TMI jokes about indigestion, compressed bladders, innie belly buttons popping out like little erect penises or like posted “I was here” signs from the actual penises.
Word Length: 423


Photo by Mackinac Fudge Shop 12/2008.

Something from Nothing

7 Jan

SilenceNot the first time I’ve spun a story from my focus on one word and I’m sure it won’t be the last. Woke up this morning thinking too many things at once, which produced a few false starts. So I closed my eyes and said, “Silence, that’s what I need.” After a few minutes of a quiet mind I typed the word silence into my Word file. And the shorty was born. Almost more of a prose poem.


Working Title: Silence
1st Sentence: It’s been a long time coming, this silence.
Favorite Sentence: You had to fight for your share of enough—enough breakfast, enough mattress, enough water for a bath, enough room to speak, enough mother, enough father.
Word Length: 238


The photo above, taken in Perugia by Flickr user Ale 8/2005, was labeled “Silence,” and I agree the word is apt to describe this lovely, peaceful space.

Virginia Tradition

6 Jan

Salt Herring MenuOne of my favorite and really intense memories from very young childhood is of the occasional Sunday breakfast made up of fried salt herring, eggs, and biscuits. (Yes, probably that should be “salted” herring, but I remember that we never said it that way.) We didn’t have much money, so only rarely–after a good paycheck with overtime–did my father get that craving and drive out early on a Sunday to hit a local place that sold the fried salt herring. I have no idea how the rest of my family felt but I was always Daddy’s little girl, certainly with regard to food, and I remember practically vibrating in anticipation, waiting for his return. He’d come back with brown paper packages containing the just-fried fish. My mother would open the packets on the table, add freshly baked biscuits and scrambled eggs, and we’d be off and running, eating our food from the paper. Half-meal, half-sport. After a few false starts on a shorty, this memory came to me. I asked my husband, also raised in Virginia but by parents who are not native to the state, if he’d ever had this breakfast and he said no. I did a Google search for “salt herring breakfast” and every hit I got specifically for that phrase came from a Virginia diner or a Virginia Moose lodge or Ruritan club. I copied the menu item above from the breakfast menu on the Virginia Diner’s website (located in Wakefield). Apparently a “salt herring breakfast” is a Virginia tradition! I’m delighted to discover this and to know I was part of it. Too enchanted not to write about it, though the shorty didn’t turn out well.


Working Title: Salt Herring
1st Sentence: He wanted a better life for his children and he wanted to provide more for his family than just three square meals a day, enough clothes, the occasional necessary trip to the doctor, and school supplies, all of which we could sometimes afford and sometimes not.
Favorite Sentence: Those salt herring breakfasts came at a time of possibility, when our living in this new, wild place still felt like camping, or a field trip.
Word Length: 1,211


Photo from the Virginia Diner website.

Fear of Everything

5 Jan

Pop CornWoke up thinking about aversion therapy and then I started laughing about how aversion therapy might be attempted for someone like poor Charlie Brown, who realizes with Lucy’s help in “A Charlie Brown Christmas” that he fears everything. Brought all this to the page and had fun with it.


Working Title: Aversion Therapy
1st Sentence: Scared of snakes?
Favorite Sentence: She tries to remember to focus on her food whenever she eats but she’s like everyone else, she can forget herself, she’s been known to thoughtlessly hoover anything from stringy roast beef to melted mozzarella to eminently trachea-block-worthy popcorn.
Word Length: 505


Photo by bader wale 11/2012.

Wholly Holy Holey

4 Jan

Denim HoleThis story was born because I woke up thinking about the words wholly, holy, and holey (hole-y), which got me thinking about how holiness is generally considered a plus but holeyness (hole-i-ness) not so much (although for some things, like Swiss cheese and colanders, a good thing). As for the shorty, still dark stuff but at least there’s a little word play in this one and I think this shorty might turn out to be a keeper.


Working Title: Your Holiness
1st Sentence: We thought we were being clever, calling him “Your Holiness”—Your Hole-i-ness, har har—because of the splits and tears in his clothes.
Favorite Sentence: And then His Holiness finally gets righteous.
Word Length: 274


Photo by Stilfehler 6/2009.

Big Downer

3 Jan

Birthday CandlesIt seems the fatigue is producing some pretty dark stuff and not with the usual relief of humor. I read the day’s shorty again just now and winced. Moving on to the next and hoping for light.


Working Title: Happy Birthday
1st Sentence: Happy birthday.
Favorite Sentence: I understood, then, the shape of the hole I carry in my belly, the reason for the black limn on every experience, and why I always cry when I laugh.
Word Length: 271


Photo by Sophie Riches 12/2012.

Still tired.

2 Jan

Potato ChipsI’m writing and back-dating story posts now, and when I consult my notes to see what I was thinking when I wrote each day’s shorty, I mostly see “I’m tired.” Today’s shorty might or might not come good when I have a chance to go back to it, but anyway I’m grateful for it because my favorite sentence gives me an excuse to post a photo of potato chips. Mmmmm.


Working Title: Pledge
1st Sentence: A new day, a new year, a new life of integrity.
Favorite Sentence: If you pretend that the handful of potato chips you snag on the way through the kitchen, or the two Hershey’s kisses you fish out of the candy bowl at work on the way to your cubicle don’t count—because you ate them in motion?—and for that reason you don’t have to list them in your food diary you talk about to everyone within earshot, oh it’s changing your life, that food diary, then you are lying to yourself.
Word Length: 399


Photo by Evan-Amos 10/2010.

Happy New Year!

1 Jan

Baby BedDecember kicked my Daily Shorty butt. I was in danger of shutting down multiple times, which is why I’m yet again backdating story posts. When I’m that fatigued, I can only keep up with the stories, and posts have to go by the wayside. Anyway, here’s to a more energetic 2013! Starting the year with a shorty about a topic alien to me: motherhood. I have been spared the duty of parsing mothering advice but I see my friends negotiating the deluge of shoulds coming from all quarters.


Working Title: So Much Promise
1st Sentence: Out loud, Dana said this: Good morning, Bettina. How did you sleep, Bettina? Hmm? How did you sleep?
Favorite Sentence: The guidelines had been very clear about the difference, and how the first would create an angry, willful child who would come home from college and live in the basement until she was 40, whereas the second ensured that Bettina would become a world-renowned research scientist or ballerina or perhaps a multi-lingual diplomat.
Word Length: 619


Photo of a traditional baby bed in Mexico.

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Goodbye December, My 8th Month!

31 Dec

Christmas Cookies

Saying Goodbye to December!

I neglected to take a photo of the Christmas cookies I baked this year. I usually bake 10 to 14 kinds but had to cut that in half or so because of this challenge. No matter, there was plenty of fancy sugar to go around. Anyway, my cookies are not as pretty as this plate, which nicely captures the spirit of all that fun in the kitchen and looks like the perfect collection of sweets to celebrate my 8th month. Photo by Till Westermayer 12/2010.

Pepys Day 7!

31 Dec

Christmas PuddingI’m celebrating the end of Week 35 with the tastiest looking picture of a Christmas pudding I’ve ever seen. Samuel Pepys would approve, I’m sure. As for the work of the day, I shouldn’t be surprised that 350 years ago on December 31, Samuel Pepys used his diary to assess his situation and that of his country as a new year dawned. It was a time of political unrest in England, and that got me thinking about the two words “resolution”—that word we obsess over whenever January 1 comes calling—and “revolution,” and how I might connect them. That was the germ for the day’s shorty, which is playful and not about much of anything. What a remarkable week! Many thanks to old Sam, to Phil Gyford, who runs the site where I read the diary entries, and to all the lovely people who have been leaving annotations on the entries. Even when I was exhausted, which is the whole week, I got such a kick out of thinking, ahh, Sam wrote his diary entry exactly 350 years ago today, and here I am, making a story inspired by what he wrote. It’s like I’ve been carrying around a bit of Pepys’s writer-DNA. Very satisfying.


Working Title: New Year Revolution
1st Sentence: At some point, probably in college, when she’d shattered the high school self so carefully constructed, emerged from the scraps of that shell like a fresh-skinned superhero on a righteous mission, Melanie decided that the birth of a new year called not for the formulating of resolutions, but for the fomenting of revolutions.
Favorite Sentence: Into her forties, now, the mother of middle-schoolers, the wife of a moody, detached, golf-loving dentist who keeps disappearing her Victoria’s Secret catalogs for purposes unconfessed, she is anxious as ever for more wins to tuck under her tightly cinched belt.
Word Length: 1,000


Photo by Man vyi 12/2006.

Pepys Day 6!

30 Dec

Samuel Pepys PlaqueThe liveliest of the diary entries yet! Pepys recorded a fat handful of juicy details on December 30, 1662, but the one I and my lowly mind entertained the most was a tidbit handed over during a heavy-drinking lunch by a couple of officers in the Dutch East India Company, who told Pepys about a method for increasing a man’s fertility used by the native peoples of the Cape of Good Hope. I had to read the annotations to discover what exactly this method entailed, because the editor of the edition used for this site had excised the details—too faint of heart. I don’t blame him. The method? “[W]hen they come to age, the men do cut off one of the stones of each other, which they hold doth help them to get children the better and to grow fat” (see 3rd annotation). I wasn’t likely to forget that but what stands out to me more than the mental images of gore and my horror at the pain these poor men endured is the realization by these people, so long ago, that a MAN could have something to do with fertility—an insight that escaped Westerners for quite some time. In any case, talk of “stones”—again, I wince for those men—was particularly good inspiration, apparently, because I’m very pleased with the day’s shorty.


Working Title: Good Girl
1st Sentence: He’d read somewhere, in one of those ridiculous pamphlets he picked up at that back-to-earth, commune outfit in the next county, no doubt, that walnuts enhance fertility.
Favorite Sentence: Should you want to spark a baby with a man who has left behind entirely the funny, sexy guy you married, to become this fretful, forehead-creased accountant of passing days, the keeper of the calendar logging everything that happens between your legs, the man-splainer who intones the word “menses,” when instructing you about your own goddamn cycle, who has forgotten entirely about your breasts but could write an epic poem about your ovaries?
Word Length: 628


Photo by Man vyi 12/2008. Inscription by “The Corporation of the City of London”: In a house on this site, Samuel Pepys, diarist, was born. 1632-1703.

Pepys Day 5!

29 Dec

Samuel Pepys Portrait BookplateOn December 29, 1662, as Samuel Pepys was making his usual rounds about town, he heard about “the burning of Mr. De Laun, a merchant’s house in Loathbury, and his lady … and her whole family; not one thing, dog nor cat, escaping; nor any of the neighbours almost hearing of it till the house was quite down and burnt.” He found the story to be “a most strange thing” and so do I. How could a massive fire go unnoticed for so long? That’s the detail that inspired the day’s shorty. Too bad the shorty itself isn’t worth noticing. Make friends, dear shorty, because you will not be leaving my hard drive.


Working Title: Keeping Time
1st Sentence: I was the first to notice.
Favorite Sentence: “Maybe they weren’t home,” whispered my Marnie.
Word Length: 688


Photo of engraving by Robert White, after a portrait by Sir Godfrey Kneller. Engraving (with Pepys’s motto beneath) served as the frontispiece to Pepys’s ‘Naval Memoirs” (1690). Courtesy of the British Museum, London.

Pepys Day 4!

28 Dec

Samuel Pepys BustOn this day 350 years ago, Samuel Pepys and his wife snubbed Lady Batten at church by leaving before her. According to the rules of etiquette, they should have allowed the higher-ranked woman to exit first. Ha! Very British hijinks likely ensued. He says only, “…which I believe will vex her.” That was the detail that tickled my brain all day as I tried to come up with a short story. Eventually, in desperation, I just started typing variations of the word “snub” over and over, which got me thinking about someone refusing to speak to a friend, which then made me think of a silent pet parrot.


Working Title: Hey, Sweetie
1st Sentence: My parrot will no longer speak to me.
Favorite Sentence: So if I give him more jelly beans, I’m disobeying the doctor, I’m knowingly imperiling my parrot’s sensitive birdie system.
Word Length: 1,030


Photo by John Salmon (12/2008) of a bust of Samuel Pepys outside Seething Lane, London EC3, the location of one of his homes. From the collection at geograph.org.uk.

Pepys Day 3!

27 Dec

Pepys Diary PageOn December 27, 1662, Samuel Pepys mentioned in his diary that he’d spent time that day in uninteresting company. The star of the day’s shorty is having a rough week that culminates in a nasty break of temper at a party he really wishes he wasn’t attending.


Working Title: Done
1st Sentence: It happened the first time at work, while he was on an important conference call with a client last week.
Favorite Sentence: All these shiny, over-tanned people with too-ready smiles and unnaturally bright hair put him on edge.
Word Length: 634


Photo of a page in H.B. Wheatley, ed, The Diary of Samuel Pepys: Pepysiana (London, 1899).

Pepys Day 2!

26 Dec

Samuel Pepys Diary350 years ago today, Samuel Pepys noted in his diary that he saw the play “The Villaine.” After several false starts, his trip to the theatre inspired today’s shorty.


Working Title: Fame
1st Sentence: About midway through the second act, and with no warning, Bettina began to shed her clothes.
Favorite Sentence: These were his words getting lost in the curve of an inner thigh, his metaphors slipping down a cool shoulder and disappearing into the sssshhhh of falling cotton.
Word Length: 858


Photo of a book cover by Alfred Garth Jones for a 1902 edition of the published diary.

Prompts from Pepys!

25 Dec

Samuel Pepys PortraitIf I’m ever feeling full of myself for writing a story every day for so many months, I need only remind myself of Samuel Pepys to prevent ego-bloat. The man wrote a diary entry every single day for 10 years, from January 1, 1660, until the end of 1669. Now THAT is a commitment! I’ve been alternating story-prompt weeks with non-story-prompt weeks, and it’s time for prompts again. In brainstorming possible prompts, I thought of old Sam’s diary, which I’d always heard was pretty lively. Turns out, a man named Phil Gyford has been publishing the diary entries every day since January 1, 2003, at this wonderful site (so as it happens, they’ll finish out the tenth year this December 31). Oh, how I love the interwebs! I decided to read the entry from December 25, 1662, as my inspiration for the day’s shorty, just because I like round numbers. On Christmas day in 1662, Samuel Pepys wrote in his diary that he had enjoyed “a mess of brave plum-porridge,” a detail that inspired a short story 350 years later. I wrote this one in the form of a recipe.


Working Title: Christmas Pudding
1st Sentence: 10 to 12 long, heavy sighs.
Favorite Sentence: 1 argument that involves more than two family members, lasts at least twenty-four minutes, and starts with a disagreement about whether garland is prettier than icicles OR whether colored lights are prettier than white lights, and ends with a reference to a sin committed by one of the arguers at least ten years ago.
Word Length: 241


Photo of 1666 Samuel Pepys portrait by John Hayls (1600–1679).

Goodbye to Week 34!

24 Dec

TwizzlersAnd another week locked away! I once posted a pic of a Dark Milkyway as my celebration treat and confessed then that my palate can be a very cheap date. My husband put Twizzlers in my Christmas stocking this year and I squealed with delight when I found them. So enjoy with me this very cheap treat as I say goodbye to another week. The day’s shorty was inspired by another scrap from the Idea File that I then mostly junked once the story took shape. The story’s got some gaps–just barely makes it into my definition of “complete” for the purposes of this challenge–but it’s also got some good potential.


Working Title: What Perfect Looks Like
1st Sentence: What would a perfect world look like?
Favorite Sentence: In a perfect world the girl who walked her college campus in fluttery broom skirts and sandals, handing out flyers decrying the brutality of her own government’s spy games in South America and the Middle East, would not grow into a woman who worked for the U.S.’s largest private defense firm, up to its ears and bad toupees in dirty money and blowback-control.
Word Length: 1,168


Photo by Evan-Amos 11/2010.

Another Story Scrap

23 Dec

BechamelSeveral starts got me nowhere and my mind felt blank, so I went looking for something interesting in stories that are unfinished or finished but bad. I stumbled over a paragraph that I’d tacked onto the end of a poor story I’ve never been able to rescue in the four or five years of occasionally playing with it. That (now re-worked) paragraph sparked the day’s shorty.


Working Title: In the End
1st Sentence: If she’d been asked to predict what she’d think about in her final moments, she would have said, of course, her loved ones.
Favorite Sentence: Béchamel, béchamel—like a lapping wave of sun-warm water, the light lick of perfume spray, the soothing tones of that wind chime hung on the porch in North Carolina, where she spent a month every summer with Grandma, where the sleeping is best out in the cool breeze, the slippery air.
Word Length: 346


Photo of white sauce (béchamel) on the stovetop by Roozitaa 10/2012.

More Fun with 7

22 Dec

ZombiesIt’s been a while since I’ve written a shorty for sheer amusement. Feels good!


Working Title: 7 Reasons To Go Zombie
1st Sentence: 1. You never have to run.
Favorite Sentence: 4. By nature the zombie is a social animal who bonds with his zombie fellows and travels in packs, so you will never again stare at your bright red Fiesta-ware dinner plate inherited from your mother, sawing at a slap of ham by candlelight, reviewing all the choices you made that brought you here, alone at this table, on Christmas night, with “Joy to the World” playing on a loop.
Word Length: 429


Photo by Jeremy Keith 10/2007.

Story Scrap

21 Dec

Eye ShadowAhh, back to that long, over-ambitious, unfinish-able story that partly launched this challenge. Not long after getting my MFA, I started on a linked collection of stories set here in Maine (I’m a transplant from NC). I poured my heart into it and I have written, oh, 60 or 70 pages of material for the “launch” story and other characters and situations I want to develop. But almost three years later I still hadn’t completed that first story and couldn’t find my way out of it. Nor could I finish any other story-in-progress, which is mostly why I committed to writing a story every day in May, yada yada. The day’s shorty is a re-worked excerpt from that unfinished story. I have no idea why, in the middle of working on a lackluster something-else, I remembered this chunk and was inspired to make a shorty of it, but there you go.


Working Title: Watching Her
1st Sentence: She waits.
Favorite Sentence: Yes, of course she points, of course she will not speak unless you look directly into her frosted eyes, a girl like that.
Word Length: 314


Photo credit.

Sense of Place

20 Dec

SwimmingI tend not to provide much setting in my stories. My characters could be any sort of people, located Anywhere, USA. So one of the things always lurking in the back of my creative brain is the desire to incorporate local landscape and culture into my writing more. In one small effort, today’s shorty grew from a description of the river that bordered the back of our property growing up. That bit has been in my idea file for a while, so it needed its own space.


Working Title: Our River
1st Sentence: A narrow river ran through the woods behind our house.
Favorite Sentence: The “swimming part” would be a place for the kids to get away from the Virginia sun, a place to grow long and sleek, to revel in owning not just a hunk of earth but a river.
Word Length: 328


This photo of a swimming spot on the Squannacook river in NH (by Ivan Massar, 1924-, for EPA 8/1973, NARA record: 2543545) looks a lot like our small swimming spot on the North Anna in Louisa Co., VA.