Fizzled

16 Feb

GhostSometimes when I’m fishing for story I hook a word that I don’t want to let go. The word I caught for this shorty was “figment.” I developed a really strong beginning from that word but then totally fizzled on the ending. Hopefully I can pick up the thread in revision and do a much better job.


Working Title: Figment
1st Sentence: She just doesn’t believe in that ghost shit, never has.
Favorite Sentence: How to describe “dubious” emerging from the writ-in-air face of a shimmering, transparent, apparently former man?
Word Length: 1,056


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