Again, a whole day of effort, but I got there. And the story is pretty good, maybe a keeper. The idea file is really coming in handy these days.
Working Title: Bitch-Beast
1st Sentence: The goal of the court-ordered therapy, they had agreed in the first session (though she had agreed less), was to bring Susan to a clear understanding and full acknowledgment of the behavior that had brought her here.
Favorite Sentence: How, when she gets angry now, she hardly notices because it’s a faint echo of that day, a plaintive cry to the bitch-beast who never comes.
Word Length: 804
Photo by Brocken Inaglory, 2006.
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