More Yellow

20 May

A yellow hangover from yesterday. I pushed hard to get something that would please me a little. So not a total clunker but it would take a strong revision to turn this one into a keeper.

Working Title: Michelle-O the Yellow Who Plays the Cello
1st Sentence: They are gathered in the girls’ bathroom.
Favorite Sentence: The day she showed up at PhysEd wearing the doctored shorts and tee—now muddy brown with orange splotches wherever there had been yellow—the kids stared at first, then of course understood exactly why Michelle-O had messed with the clothes.
Word Length: 769

One Response to “More Yellow”

  1. cynthia July 5, 2012 at 8:47 PM #


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