Happy Birthday Pat!

23 May

As part of my birthday present to you, dear husband, I dispatch today’s shorty in record time. I even made it creepy, just for you.

Working Title: Script
1st Sentence: If the cab doesn’t seem right—something is off with the paint, the design, you’re not sure, but it’s not quite right….
Favorite Sentence: If the man looks everywhere but at you until finally, as you lean into the back, you catch his eye, but he’s not looking at you so much as he is taking you apart at the joints, he’s gauging where to place the tip of the knife so that he can lay the heel of his hand on the butt to push down, down, through the bone, a quick and easy cut, a child could do it….
Word Length: 228

Photo by Puschinka 2009

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