Total Lemon

12 May

I’m surprised it didn’t happen sooner. The first 11 stories of my Daily Shorty project please me. Either I consider them worth revising and likely one day submittable or I know they will amuse a loved one or a friend. Or the story makes me laugh or scratches an itch or contains a character or a sentence I love. This story? None of the above.

Working Title: Honey Peas
1st Sentence: Do you know that old rhyme about peas and honey?
Favorite Sentence: And I wave her across the street, watching those long linen skirts she favors brushing her ankles above the leather lacework of her sandals.
Word Length: 349

Photo by Bordercolliez, June 2011.

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