Archive | August, 2012

An Easier One

4 Aug

Nice to get an easy one today. Hopefully a sign of things to come! Let’s go, August, come on, let’s pick it up. Now, let’s see… what’s Michael Phelps doing tonight?


Working Title: Now What?
1st Sentence: She sat in the theater as the credits rolled.
Favorite Sentence: The Gofer, the Gaffer, the Candlestick Maker.
Word Length: 274


Photo by Belinda Hankins Miller, July 2007.

Still Wobbly

3 Aug

Again, had to work hard to get the story on the page and then I had to press like crazy to finish it. Really liked the vision for this one but had to settle for a mediocre delivery. Hope it comes together in revision. I really miss the days of this challenge when I had time to look at older stories and re-work them. Maybe soon I will find a better rhythm and add revision to my days again. Not until the Olympics are over, that’s for sure.


Working Title: Me, Too
1st Sentence: Juror #3 complained about the bottled water.
Favorite Sentence: They were arguing about the war, about the last thirty years of trickle-down economics, about gun control and racism and gay marriage, and whether public school students should be forced to observe a moment of silence before lunch because some Baptist kid had been taught to believe the whole world should stand still while he thanks Jesus for a bologna sandwich and a bag of Fritos.
Word Length: 1,071


Photo here.

Slow as molasses in January.

2 Aug

Too many things to do and I can’t seem to just set my feet, scowl, and knock down each pin. I think it might be time to admit that having to complete a story every day is extremely mentally taxing. What to do? I can’t stop.


Working Title: Tango Tangle
1st Sentence: Sure, they could learn a couple of others, too, but it was the Tango she wanted in her feet.
Favorite Sentence: In the end she sank to the ground in a kind of slow motion twirl, landing in a bunched up slump with Cliff leaning over her, his face red as a split tomato.
Word Length: 1,959


Photo by Jenny Mealing, October 2005.

Greetings August!

1 Aug

To celebrate finishing a quarter of stories, I took the day off from everything but my shorty. Which is good, because it took me ALL DAY to put this little thing out. I started three stories, even wrote three pages for one that I just threw away. But finally, finally, August sets sail.


Working Title: Miss Lucky
1st Sentence: The winner is… Melissa Belby!
Favorite Sentence: Occasionally—in a moment she knows by instinct is exactly right for it—she opens her eyes a bit wider, even, and smiles small.
Word Length: 570


Photo by Vera and Jean-Christophe, April 2008.